tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-89944242011-07-08T13:44:20.763-04:00An adventure in storytelling. A journey of a thousand pages begins with a single word... Story updates Fridays.Listynoreply@blogger.comBlogger3631100tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8994424.post-18960953192131351752010-04-06T19:57:00.004-04:002010-04-06T20:11:44.541-04:00

It was with a heavy heart that I stopped writing Zaphael's Journey. My mother was diagnosed with breast cancer, and I had an entire year of taking care of her, with near-crippling depression stemming from that and a long, terrible winter and non-existent summer. It took a long time to get my writing-legs (or fingers?) back.But, I am starting to do just that. Though this spring was terrible, I

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If I have to cling to the same place for a long time, I fear the vines will not hold. When I am certain there is no one hanging out the window, I begin creeping down again. I hear Tanner doing the same. We dare not speak. Barely above the surf I can hear Victor shouting within, but soon it fades from hearing.We get to where the outer wall reaches to meet us; I hesitate, wondering how to

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Of course. Chapter Tuesday.Sigh.

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A week late, I know. But it has been horrible getting back into the groove of things, and I have been quite busy. But yeah, let's get this show on the road. I will definitely try and get a brand spanking new chapter up by Friday.Hey, it's Christmas. A time for miracles.

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Due to issues that have arisen, I need to put the story on hold until December. There's nothing I can do about it at this point, I am going to be away from the internet for quite some time, and when I get back to it, I will still be insanely busy. Then NaNo starts. So instead of promising sporadic updates I may or may not be able to keep up with, I'm just putting the story on hold until

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I seem to be getting a chapter out on Fridays pretty regularly, so that's what I'm going to stay with for now. Hopefully updates will be steady until November.

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I have climbed ropes down treacherous walls before, but this is particularly unpleasant. If I am caught here, what then?I cannot allow it that to happen. I creep downwards, teeth set, hoping beyond hope to reach the vines before anyone comes to my room.There! My foot touches greenery and I sigh with relief as I slide downwards, burying my fingers among the thick vines. They rustle gently as I

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I cannot stay. Victor is not going to keep to our agreement. I will not stay.I remember Verona's words in Ram's Gate and can think of no better option. The ivy is thick not far below me, and only a few lengths of bedsheet tied together will bring me to where I can climb down to the rocky cliffs below. I work all afternoon tearing and tying, hiding the length when the shame-faced serving girl

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Next Chapter Friday. I'm hoping to get a lot done in the two months before NaNoWriMo.

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"What is the meaning of this!" I shout, leaping to my feet as Victor enters."You have not been behaving as a proper Lady of Dunn Maris," he replies evenly. "I will not be contradicted in front of anyone!"I compose myself. Getting into a row will not get me out of here any sooner. "I apologize for contradicting you," I say as evenly as I can manage. "But you know I speak my mind, and I do

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Okay, not so much for certain. I'm not feeling all that great, but I'll try for this week anyway, if not, I will post a chapter next week.I'm really sorry this hasn't been working as well. I have some plans I hope will help.Again, apologies.

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"Victor is overwhelmed by his sudden power," I say finally, slowly. "He...he is making a mistake, but he is not mad, and he will see reason.""Do you truly believe that?"I consider this carefully. Do I truly believe it? I certainly want to. "I have to," I say finally. "The alternative is unthinkable."There is a long silence on the other side of the door, and for a moment I think he has left.

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The conversation continues on Friday.

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I never wanted to believe that Augustan was mad. And I certainly never thought that his son was mad as well.But I am afraid I may have to rethink my position, for I awoke this morning to find my bedroom door bolted from the outside. After and pounding and kicking it for a bit, I go to peer out the window, but it is high, and I am reluctant to make the attempt.A rapping at the door makes me

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That evening I pour over maps and deeds in Augustan's old study, looking for land free to give to the dark elves. Soren joins me for a while, rifling around the stacks of parchment and books. "I assume he knew where everything was," he sighs. "A shame no one else does.""I assume Victor will go through it all," I say, raising a faded document to see it better in the lamplight. "He wishes to be

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I think I'm going to make these updates more sparse. When chapters are up they will be up on Tuesdays and/or Fridays and perhaps it should be left at that, and I'll use the updates when there's going to be a major delay, like there was this past week, and is going to be this week. The next part is going to span several chapters, so since I am busy this week I think I'm going to post the next

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"Why?" I ask finally, after a moment of silence.Victor looks at me, eyes dark. "My father made a deal with dark elves, and we have seen the result! I will not follow in his footsteps.""Then why did you make the deal with C'raiven?"He paused. "At the time, I saw no other way to save you.""Then you must honor the agreement."He glares. "You will not tell me what I must and must not do! If you

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Dangit! Well, I'll have at least one chapter up this week, and hopefully two if I remember this time.

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He struck me! Again! The first time I could almost forgive, but this second time, before a visiting diplomat, this is too much to bear! How I loathe him in this moment!I fall back against the meeting table, and find myself staring at the deep grain of the polished stone. I straighten slowly, thinking out how I shall react. I am Lady of Dunn Maris, and I shall act accordingly.I do not look at

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Dangit, just when I start to get into the swing of things I'm under the weather again. Two chapters next week.

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The moment the door closes on the meeting room I turn to look at Victor. “How could you lie so?”“I would never promise land to Dark Elves.”C’raiven frowns. “Beginning your reign on a note of falsehood does not bode well, Lord of Dunn Maris.”“You will not speak so to me in my own home,” he snarls in response.“What is wrong with you?” I cry. “Just honor your word! Or else I shall!”“I forbid you

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Hi! See, back in the swing of things I hope. I will have two chapters up this week, almost certainly.By the way, always take Tuesday and Friday to mean anytime between mid-day that day through the next.This should be interesting. I don't think the story is going in the direction I expected it to but hey, that's okay!

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“What do you mean you recall no such price?” I gasp.He turns a cool gaze upon me. “It is an elvish fantasy. I recall no such bargain.”“Truly, husband? Because I do,” I reply.His glare is hard. “Silence. I am sure the elves simply poisoned your mind with lies.”I look at Soren and Nemean, who are staring with eyes just as wide. “I have witnesses to this bargain, do I not?”“You do, My Lady,”

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It takes a long time for me to fall asleep after the dance, for my mind is racing. So the next morning I am a bit slower than usual. But how good it feels to wear trousers again! I have not for days.Victor looks a bit impatient when I arrive. “I am not late,” I tell him with a smile.“You are not early,” he tells me as we enter the throne room. He sits himself in his father’s chair—his chair

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When I finally speak, it is very quietly. “What do you want, Nemean?”He is still for a long moment. “I am not used to wanting anything,” he admits. “As I said, my choices were always decided for me. And suppose that has led me to believe that very little we do can change our fate.”“I see,” I say, smoothing my skirts before standing up. “Then I shall leave you to your fate, while I find my own,

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There will be a chapter up tonight, and then two more next week. This hiatus is just what I needed to get back into the groove. No Monday update, since I'm posting here and now.Happy Spring, by the way.

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I think over his words in silence for a moment. “As Soren pointed out, your concern was not entirely irrational. You knew me well enough to predict exactly how I would behave.”He chuckles. “I knew Raguel, as well.”“On the other hand, you did manage to surprise me. I did not think you out of any of us would behave so rashly.”“I surprised myself, as well. But then…” he pauses. “My father used

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So, I was visiting my dear friend who hurt her leg this winter, and needed a bit of freedom. But I'm back now, and hopefully will have a new chapter up on Friday.

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“Do you think I should remain with Victor then?” I ask finally.He pauses before he replies. “I believe Adamant said you were to be Lady of Dunn Maris, and I believe that fate may be harder to escape than you think it is.”“He didn’t qualify the length of time,” I reply blithely.“No, he didn’t,” Nemean agrees. “Which is more telling.”I glance at the stars above. “Then have no hope, Nemean. I

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When Nemean refuses to speak for several long minutes, I turn and look at him. "I suppose that both Victor and myself are behaving quite selfishly. But it was his idea to end the marriage, not mine. He wishes more than anything to marry that foolish girl. I should not have expected more from a Penrose.""You did not protest however, when he suggested it.""Of course not! I will not remain

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Late, late, I'm always late, I know.But let's see if I can get two up this week, huh? That would be totally sweet.Happy 2008, everyone. I hope this year treats you well.

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“Victor and I spoke long into the night two days ago,” I say quietly. “He has fallen madly in love with Deniella Penrose. He says he still is fond of me, but now understands that he never truly loved me as a man should love a woman.”Nemean doesn’t answer, but I can sense his quiet anger. After a moment I plunge on. “He, of course, assumes that I have never loved him, that I married him out of

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We are silent for a long time, watching the stars. “I miss my father,” I say finally. “I have never wished for him more than these past few months since Augustan called me home. I could so use his council.”Nemean doesn’t answer me.“And I grieve for Augustan. I had no wish to see him die, not really, though I threatened it more than once. He and my father were such great friends.”“Not so great

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There's nothing like throwing my favorite couple together to get the creative juices flowing...I should have done so a while ago. Anyway, I would have two up this week but what with Christmas and all, and then New Years, I think I'll do one this coming Friday, and the next one the Friday after.Then, maybe we can have two the first week of '08. Man, could it be '08 already? That's unreal.So I

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Moonlight illuminates the gardens. There is a stillness in the air broken only by the rush of the distant waves. The sound is still not pleasant to me. I wonder if it ever shall be again.In fact, I have not slept well these nights, with the sound of the ocean so close. It once used to lull me to sleep, now it invades my dreams and darkens them.I smooth my skirts some as I step out into the

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Last time, I could not keep Victor away from me. Now he is nowhere near, dancing with the few noble ladies here, and stopping to talk with his generals. I note that he is careful not to dance with Deniella either, in fact I have only seen her briefly throughout the evening.I see Tanner on the balcony and come out. “So, we come full circle, do we?”He turns to smile. “Only if I was planning to

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The installation is a tedious one, but the people are so very happy. They cheer for us as we ride through the city, they throw flowers and call us the saviors of Dunn Maris.Soren greets me in the ballroom where the nobles have gathered. It is not as large an event as the last ball; there was no time to send invitations to outlying regions, and neither would they wish to travel. The darkness

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Sigh. I'm dog sitting for my mother this week, so I have double the usual number, and that plus the snow storm we had up here has put me behind.So one this week, too.

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I stare at the dress in silence.I hate it.Tomorrow morning, I shall be installed as Lady of Dunn Maris. Every bone in my body aches to run away, to pretend that I can escape this fate. But I cannot. There is no avoiding it, to reach the end of this entanglement, I must see it through.Victor and I are in agreement as to what will be done. We sat up all night discussing it, planning out what we

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Okay, that's it! It's do or die. If I can't get this story in shape, there's no use continuing. So I am absolutely determined to get two chapters up this week. I am going to force myself through this dry spell, and get to the good stuff, because I do have good stuff planned, and I have to see it through. I am not giving up yet.

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“But Zin is still in Goth!”Victor gazes at me as if I have told him the sky is blue. “And we must be installed as Lord and Lady of Dun Maris.”It is the evening after the battle. The cleanup goes well, though there is still much to do. I have been touring my manor all day. “But to celebrate at a time like this…”“We celebrate to let the people know that there is nothing to fear,” he replies

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Okay, so I think I have the next chapter in mind, so one update early in the week, since I'll be busy over Thanksgiving.I know things have been crazy and sporadic, and I'm sorry. There are just times in a story when nothing seems to work and none of the characters cooperate and no one knows what's going on. But I am determined to continue. I know what Zin wants, and I think it's brilliant, and

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“Zaphael…” she begins slowly. “I…I am sorry…”“Nonsense,” Victor interrupts her. “The fault is mine, not yours.”“I think it is both your faults,” I snap, glaring between them. “Did your sisters teach you such behavior, Den, or does it just come naturally to the Ladies of Penrose? Truly, I may have expected it from one of them, but not from you.”She frowns just a little. “You shouldn’t insult

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Urf...tired. Well, I will definately try for a chapter a week all this November. Look for it late Friday, maybe Saturday, until further notice.NaNo is going...okay. I shared what I had with a friend who agreed with me that it's nothing ground-breaking, which is actually good, the pressure is off to write something "good." Instead, I'm going to use the opportunity to play with words and

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"So what now?" I ask Victor. "Though you may find me irritating, the truth remains that Zin is still in Goth.""I believe General Penrose speaks truly," Victor replies. "I must secure my birthright as Lord of Dunn Maris. Once that is done, we can focus on Zin.""Then we must act swiftly, for every day we tarry is another day he has to carry out whatever plan he has."Victor stands up. "I intend

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Sorry about the late chapter. It was just the way the cards fell.I have a feeling this week is also going to be busy, so I am going to try for one chapter. I'm afraid I'll probably be limited to one entry a week this coming month, since yes, it's November, and I'm going to take another stab at NaNoWriMo. I'm not confident. I can't even keep up with the stories I'm writing, much less one I

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The sky glows with the great bonfires around which the townspeople dance and celebrate their liberation. The city elders have crept out of hiding, and are already making plans for the formal installation of Victor and myself as Lord and Lady of Dunn Maris. The generals, as well, have gathered to inspect the aftermath."I suppose Lady Zaphael well now say that this was all too easy," says Robert

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Yeah, well, I'm having one of those, "No one cares" evenings, and my puppy is going to need to go back to the vet tomorrow to have her wound checked, and neither is conducive to writing. Still, I'll try to have something up by the end of the week.Sigh.

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Victor and Jerome are riding up as I step out of the gates. “Zaphael! The day is won!” he calls. “They are crawling back to Goth…or attempting to. We shall slay them as they flee.”I nod. “Very good, Victor, but what of those who escape, and what of those who remain in Goth?”He eyes me as he leaps from his horse. “I should have known you would not be satisfied, Zaphael.”I laugh, and come

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My puppy has her spaying this week, which is pretty major surgery, so there will only be one chapter update this week, and probably next, but we shall see.Have a good week.

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I slam and lock the door even as Seraphina kneels down to embrace her son, probably for the last time.“You don’t believe Zin’s lies, do you, Soren?”“No,” he says quietly.I stare at him. Why does he not sound convinced? “What?” I ask. “Do you?”“Do you remember, what you said about the past being a great tapestry, that we cannot see the whole of, and must guess at?”I glare.“Father did say you

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“Zaphael?” I hear Soren call from behind, but I cannot find the words to acknowledge him.“You fiendish wench,” I snarl. “How dare you repeat his vile lies! How dare you? My father loved Stephan! If you ever say that again I shall slay you where you stand!”“Zaphael,” says Soren gently. “You sound much like Augustan.”I whirl on him. “She has dared to imply that Raguel was responsible for

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I'm writing this early because I'll be away Monday and Tuesday and might forget to post before I leave. You won't believe this, but the block is over and there will be absolutely positively two updates this week.I have found when a scene is giving you trouble, there are two solutions: leave the scene, or make the trouble part of the scene. I did the former this time, because I just didn't know

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I believe the battle is over.A silence has fallen over the city; smoke rises slowly from the castle courtyards as the fires slowly die. The only sound I hear is the distant roar of the ocean and Seraphina’s low moans.She cowers against the wall, watching Victor’s soldiers as they dispatch the wounded elves and scour the area for any hiding survivors.“Where is my son, my son?” she moans. “Did

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Yeah. I know. Sorry.Last week was horrible. No one I know had a good one. I had a terrible one. My weekend was much better and I am determined to get this going again. Enough is enough, either I do it or I don't, and I want to do it.My problem is I'm really not sure where this particular part is going, even though I know the long term goal. So I need to sit and figure it out, and once I do

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Very busy around here.I'll have one chapter up this week, by Thursday.Have a good one!

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The streets of Merolith are slick with blood and steaming water. The air is filled with shouts and cries. Fighters from both sides lay dead and dying, but I am pleased to see that the dark elves have taken the heaviest losses.We reach the Angel Gate with little resistance; they are already fleeing the city, unable to fight properly in such an unfamiliar space. But once they are outside the

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I said it would be late.Well, I honestly don't know yet. I'll have something up this week, I just don't know what. I'll try for two, but that hasn't been going very well lately. We'll see. You'll definately see something this week.

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Part IVLucrecia is retreating…or at least attempting to do so.The moment she heard that Augustan was dead she panicked. But we will not let her get away so easily. Victor calls the army to surround the Valanir. “We will not drive them back to Zin!” he shouts. “We will eradicate them here!”“Victor,” I snap as a page brings me Gloom. “The battle begins your legacy as Lord of Dunn Maris. Use

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Yes, I'm late. I found out late Sunday night that I would have a painter here for the next two...now most likely three..days doing the kitchen. It needed to be done; the wallpaper down there was simply hideous. So with all the running around, cleaning up, containing dogs and various other chores I had to do, the story took a back seat. I'll do one chapter at the end of the week, and look for

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“Zaphael!”I look up to see Soren and Nemean both stumble through the door. Blood is running down Soren’s hand; Nemean looks pained, though I see no wound.Soren instantly goes to kneel beside Augustan. “How tragic that there was no alternative,” he murmurs.“I assure you there was not,” I reply.“Nemean, what say you?” asks Victor. “Zaphael has asked me not to harm this mongrel brother of mine,

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It's Labor Day, a day when all good Americans barbecue in their backyards to celebrate the end of a lazy summer and the beginning of the laborious autumn months (is anyone buying that?)Anyway, I'm not sure quite what is going on this week, so I think I'm going to go for one chapter this time around. I will try to have it up Wednesday, but definately by Friday.And don't think that Zaphael is

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At first I am surprised that it feels so much like being struck, rather than stabbed, and then I realize that is exactly what has happened. Somehow, Victor managed to slide his blade beneath my arm to strike his father, but it was so close, it sliced through my cloak and struck my mail shirt, driving a handful of rings into my side.Augustan gasps and clutches at me, gazing past at Victor. “You…

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Augustan has strength in him yet. I cry out as Victor stumbles. He nearly drops his sword as he winces and clutches at his arm. It is where he was wounded with the cursed blade, I realize, and it must not be completely healed. As is the nature of such wounds, it has betrayed him.I pull my sword and run forward, but I have not gone more than a few steps when Victor is in sudden motion, raising

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So, if anyone is wondering why I was late posting Friday, all you have to do is look here.I am really hoping to get two chapters up this week. We gotta end this scene, and soon. I'll update if that changes, but I'm hoping it won't. Of course, with my new little project here, anything could happen.

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Their swords meet with a clash of steel. I leap backwards, shocked by the strength Augustan retains. He actually manages to block Victor and push him back. “Don’t think you can defeat me so easily, Boy!”Victor sets his teeth and lunges again, the swords clash and the two figures struggle in the center of the room. I clench my fists as I watch them. I am torn. I don’t want Augustan to die.

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Whew! What a weekend. I'll be blogging about it over here. Um, I'll get one chapter up on Friday this week, and then hopefully be able to leap into some regular updates after that.But right now, maybe a nap.

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Augustan freezes at his son’s words. “You would dare to raise a sword against me? You dare threaten to slay me? I am your father! I taught you everything you know of battle and warfare!”“And of leading a country of free people,” he replies quietly. “And Dunn Maris will be free.”He turns his bloodshot eyes upon me. “Do you agree with this cur of a son? Will you raise your sword against me?”

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I think I'll go for one chapter at the end of the week this time. The real problem isn't finding a time to write, it's finding a time to think. I mean, we're at a crucial juncture here, and I want to make it right. So I'd rather go slowly then rush through it.I think I'm going to completely blow off next week. My little sister is getting married in just about ten days, and there is a lot that

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I am hit hard, and I stumble against the wall, grasping at my attacker and trying to force him back before he can stab me. He is caught from behind by Victor, who shoves him back and slashes with his sword all in one smooth motion.I straighten up, and believe my smile is pained. “Thank you.”“I am sure you could have handled him, but I am eager to reach my father and just thought I would finish

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I feel utterly miserable about missing posts last week. I am starting to feel like nothing is ever going to be finished, and I'm never going to be able to get back into writing again. I know it isn't true but it sure feels like it some days.For this week, I'm going to say that I am getting a chapter up...but I don't know when. By Friday, at the latest. That is my goal. If I don't make it

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More unexpected things having to do with the move have come up. Chapters next week.

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As things slowly fall into place, and the downstairs is ripped out to make room for a shower and a fireplace (not in the same room of course), I am trying desperately to get back into the writing game.Seeing as how I'll be away Friday, I'm aiming for one chapter late Wednesday, and yes, it is possible that like last week, late Wednesday means Thursday. But I will try to have it on time.

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My bombs fly through the air even as Victor draws his sword. He yelps at the sight of them and yanks me back towards the corner even as they explode with a wonderful and terribly loud bang among the startled elves. They are meant to be more startling than deadly, really, and they do their job well.“Father knows you’re here, at least,” says Victor, turning back to attack our enemies, many of

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Could it be that I am starting to get back into the swing of things? Nah, can't be true.Okay, I'll try to get one chapter up this week, probably late Wednesday. There just can't be an update Friday: I'll be at Mugglefest all day Friday and into Saturday, so there just won't be any time for a second chapter this week. I'll try for two the week after, but it sort of depends on how things go.

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Once again, I must trust that my companions will be well. The roar of battle echoes up the long hall as we leap from Victor’s horse and hurry up the stairs. “Wait for me, Leviathan!” Victor shouts. The massive horse gives his head a shake.“Where do you think he is?” I ask.“Where else could he be? I am sure he is watching the battle! He must know we have breached the walls.”“How irritated

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For anyone who doesn't know, moving totally sucks. My brain feels like mush, and it is so hard getting back into the swing of writing. I was all ready to work on something Friday, but then my entire day got disrupted and everything crumbled. And the boxes are everywhere.And this week looks completely awful. But...but I want to do this. I'm going to try for maybe a chapter on Tuesday, and

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I had unexpected problems yesterday, which totally threw off my groove. I'll let everyone know Monday when the next chapter will be.Sorry.

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Hi all! I have my internet connection and am trying to get back into the swing of things, but it's still going to be a long process settling into my new house. Still, I think we can get some chapters going again.I'm going to try for a Friday chapter this week, and then after that I'll make my best attempt at a two-chapter a week schedule for a while at least. But that may be hard, this being

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I am still staggering to my feet as hooves begin to thunder around me. “Zaphael!” I hear Victor cry. I turn to see him reach down; I catch his hand and he pulls me up onto the saddle behind him. “Well done! Shall we pay my father a visit?”“I would like nothing better,” I tell him as his horse charges up the steps. I must trust that my companions will be fine. I see Lucrecia and Seraphina

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I run toward the gates. Twice, I am noticed, and twice, the elf who sees me falls before he can sound an alarm, an arrow still quivering as he hits the ground.The second time they see not me but the dark elf fall. “The gates are breached!” One shouts. “Someone is firing from within the walls!”“Find them!”I light both bombs as I reach the gate. I gave them nice long fuses for just this

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Yeah, I'm a day late updating.I have a dilemma. I am super busy packing for my big move, so my first instinct is to put updates on hold. On the other hand, the story is a critical moment here. So...what I'm going to do is have one chapter on Friday, no Monday update next week, but then a chapter that next Wednesday the 20th.Then there's nothing for it, there has to be a break while I get my

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Tanner suggests that we pull down the tapestry and hold it in front of us as we traverse the hallways, so we can hide behind it if anyone comes along. Domitianus can no longer contain himself and attacks Tanner with a candlestick for his foolishness.“Stop this at once,” snaps Nemean as Soren and I step between them. “There is no need for such theatrics. None of our enemies will be looking for

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Sorry the update is late; I'm starting to pack and things are nuts around here.I am working my best to have a chapter up late Friday.Thanks.

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We descend so low that the sound of the roaring waves echoed above us, then finally come to the set of stone stairs that take us up to a heavy wooden door. We work for a bit until we figure out it needs to be pulled, not pushed. “Brilliant,” Domitianus grunts as we all stumble backwards.The threshold is covered with a heavy tapestry; Wesleyan ducks down and slides between it and the wall, and

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There will be a chapter Friday.Long weekend. Tired. Sleep now.

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We are all on our feet in an instant. I scramble to the edge with a lightness in my step which has been missing for a great while. I am filthy and tired and I know there is a broad grin on my face. “Indeed? Have you truly found a way through, or just a cache of spiders?”Kog peers up at me. “Though there are spiders aplenty, I was referring to a way through. Clever were the stone-cutters of

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The sound of the sea roars up at us through unseen paths in the rocks. I shiver and clutch at my shoulders, drawing my knees up close. I hate it. I hate it. I try to turn my mind to more pleasant memories of the sea, but it is difficult. I twist my fingers into the fabric of my tunic, to remind myself that I am not back there, naked and starving on the cliffs.Nemean shifts beside me; his

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I am determined to get at least one, hopefully two chapters up this week. I have work that I'm behind on through no fault of my own, so I will be busy this week, but I'll try not to neglect the story.There is a move looming in my future, which means much planning and packing, and probably no internet for a time, which will mean a hiatus here late next month. But that is then. This is now, and

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It's do it fast or do it right, and I choose the latter. So no chapter today, but two next week, guaranteed. There is a lot going on in my life right now, so we may have more of these gaps and delays, but I'm hoping to keep it going steady right on through.Thanks.

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The tunnel ends suddenly in a gaping hole at our feet. The sound of the sea roars up at us.“Splendid!” snarls Domitianus. “All this way and it is for nothing!”The Dwarves lower the dripping candles down into the hole below us. “I do not believe that this is what it appears to be,” says Kog. “I believe there is a way down, hidden by the shadows and angle of the descent.”“Really?” I come over

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The tunnel is very dark, and as we move through, it becomes rougher, relying more upon the structure of the rocks to support it. Every once in a while, the dwarves stop to test the walls and floor, but so far they consider the way safe. Still, we must be careful of jagged outcroppings and short drops or steps that trip us.“You see this stone here, this is granite that cannot be easily tunneled

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So sorry about the lack of chapters, I had been hoping to get one up Thursday, maybe Friday, but life and work just interfered. There won't be a Monday Update, and only one chapter next week, on Wednesday.

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We hold our hands to our ears as the picks ring loudly in the dark enclosed basement. The Dwarves are indeed expert at wielding their tools. Kog chips off corners of brick and chunks of mortar with his pick, then Tain works his shovel into the gaps and works out the bricks and more mortar. They work much more quickly than I expect, and it isn’t long before there is a nice hole in the wall.

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We soon reach the cold stone floor of the cellar. “What fine workmanship,” says Kog.“For men,” allows Tain.“The kitchens are that way,” I gesture right. “But the sub-basement, the oldest part of the house is straight ahead.” I continue on, letting the lights of my companions illuminate my way, as if I need it. I could walk this entire house top to bottom blindfolded. We slide through a stone

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Well, things are moving right along, and I am going to have two new chapters up this week, one a little earlier than Wednesday, and one right on time on Friday.Next week, I'll be away again, and so I will have no Monday update, and no chapter on Wednesday, but I am hoping to get a chapter up Friday the 4th....oh. Scrap that. Thursday the 3rd would be better for an update. May 4th is a day I am

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My ancestral home has been in the family for more generations than I can count. It is a great, rambling building that surrounds the park behind it. From its highest point, one can overlook all the land that makes up the manor proper. It has been at least partially rebuilt seven times that I know about, twice because of fire, three times due to the wind of terrible ocean hurricanes, and twice

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Sorry about the lack of updates last week. I was simply too busy on my Easter trip to get over to Blogger. I returned to New England just in time to get hammered by a ginormous storm, and have only now regained power. There will be just one chapter this week, I'll say by Friday, if not before.Things may be sporadic for the next few weeks, but I will try to keep updates regular.Thanks for your

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As soon as twilight comes, we are on the move. The army will begin its assault at dawn.The party consists of myself and my two fellow hunters, plus Tanner and Domitianus, the two Dwarves, and Wesleyan. We creep across the fields of Angel Gate, land I know as well as I know myself. In many places, the land has been scorched and trampled, and every time I see another patch my blood boils.Nearly

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Well, I'm going away at the end of the week, so there will be only one chapter this week on Wednesday, and maybe I can get one up next week, as well. I'll update it when I know for sure. Certainly, I should be getting back to my regular schedule on the 16th, but from here on out, things are going to be getting more and more crazy around here. I'm hoping to keep my updates as regular as I

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